Corrections.The teaches said: Good introduction.
You may want to discuss your sources first before citing parenthetically.
It’s good the way you also bring in Oaks in your third paragraph. Another perspective is good. Just discuss the source.
You write well but can use another 2 or 3 paragraphs. Continue to use the class readings abs outside research to support your ideas.
Your Works Cited can go on a separate page. You did a good job!
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